I am not a poet, but I've started a tradition of writing a poem each February, to my four sons. The trick is to use their names (River, Ridge, Rowan--as in the tree, and Ryder) in some way, in the poem.
They are simple, foolish little poems, but perhaps over the years I'll get better.
Previous poems: 2006, 2007, and 2008.

The Day You Became Mine
The day you became mine,
the sky wept for joy.
Mountain ridges gathered
each
drop,
And sent the glad tidings
to the river
below.
Swelling with excitement,
the river sent the message
downstream.
Absorbed, the trees published
that you were mine,
on each leaf,
in red.
Riding the wind,
the news spread
far and wide.
The ground blushed,
and the wise earth
sighed
knowing that long before
you became mine,
I was yours.
Alina Nackos Murdock
February 2009
A poem to my boys, River, Ridge, Rowan and Ryder.
10 comments:
You never cease to amaze me!
I always look forward to your Valentine's Day poems!
That's beautiful.
WOW!! I feel the same as Paul, you never cease to amaze. Your boys are so blessed to have such beautiful poems from such a beautiful mom. Really sweet stuff.
I think this is the best one yet!
Two awesome parents.
Four handsome and lucky boys.
Happy Valentines!
This marks the anniversary of when I started reading your blog. It was a link you sent to me of last year's Valentines poem. It thought it was so clever how you worked all your boys names into that poem. Today's is no less clever. I'm wondering, did you name your boys with this very activity in mind?
I love reading them every year- they're so amazing. Thanks for taking care of my kids this weekend- so do I owe you money for all of the activities? who paid for everything? Let me know so I can send something your way. Oh and Happy Birthday Rowan! Sorry I missed the big bash- the kids are still talking about it!
Poetry is tough. I don't venture there very often. Which is why I truly enjoy yours. Hope to see you soon in Moab if we can break away soon!
that was perfect. good luck topping it. i love thinking of the earth sighing and blushing..
thanks for everything this weekend! that was so fun! we love you guys.
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